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EverYet
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
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Oh, tonight in dreams I long to see him,
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Ever yet, to feel his sweet gentle caress,
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Dreaming frost off my windows, frost off my breast..
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Whenever he goes, I shall miss him all with my heart,
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Off to the planets, moons, or towards the stars,
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Ever yet I will always yearn, following him within',
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Where ever yet our dream realms loving heart's begin.
~*~
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2003-01-11 02:20:00]
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Re: EverYet
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by Fwog on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 03:45:21 AM AEST
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Another good write ladyfawn,
I wish for you his reciprocal dream.
Sweet dreams
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Re: EverYet
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by nomad on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:05:17 AM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful, Nessa. I love the images and feelings you create here. The depths of your passion are both enchanting and fathomless. I hope he soon returns to melt your frost. |
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Re: EverYet
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:30:42 AM AEST
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Nessa very lovely passionate poem i enjoyed it very much
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Re: EverYet
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by spooky on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 11:32:35 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful,,,i'm wonder if he knows that you miss him and need him,,,well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: EverYet
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 01:31:52 PM AEST
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Lovely write, sweet Nessa... You are such a romantic....all the best to you..
(((hugs)))
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Re: EverYet
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:54:58 PM AEST
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down a myriad winding ways have i followed this feeling,
seeking those simple words that would hold me true,
lonely nights despairing that i was only dreaming,
sweet delight to discover i was dreaming always of you, |
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Re: EverYet
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 02:05:36 AM AEST
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Hey, Vanessa I liked this short and sweet. Dreaming frost off my windows, frost off my breast.. that line took me by surprise... how can u breathe frost off your breast? keep up your poems.
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Re: EverYet
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:26:08 PM AEST
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I read this once and then read it aloud. It is one of those poems that sounds heavenly to simply read it. The last sentence brought a wistful sigh. I wished it was longer!
Kie |
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