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A Wish for Tears
Contributed by
Mild_Tempest
on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 01:34:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wish I could cry this loneliness out,
Push it all out with a single shout.
Once again feel like I’m whole,
So I can feel again and have a soul.
I could cry with burning tears,
Wash away all my wildest fears.
Can I fill in my lonesome spots,
Get rid of all the tepid thoughts.
Will I feel happiness once more,
When that’s all I‘ve had to ignore.
I can feel the sadness inside of me,
Can I finally feel like I’m free.
Look into the window and see,
There’s no life worse than me.
I threw my own life away,
And this sadness, it will stay.
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Mild_Tempest
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2005-07-21 01:34:16]
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Re: A Wish for Tears
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by Skinney86 on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 02:35:54 AM AEST
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| Nice rhyming, sad theme, but good write... comment me on what you think of some of my poems! |
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Re: A Wish for Tears
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by Kie on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:50:56 PM AEST
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I honestly couldn't find anything technically wrong with your poem. It had a deep impact emotionally by the time I finished this. I even re-read it while I typed this comment.
The last stanza, is so sad, so very sad.
Kie |
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