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do you think i care
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 12:01:30 AM in AEST
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what i learnt in school was to be beaten by nuns to get tormented by kids who wanted me to pay
i never had a good life no happy family crap no love any day
i was tortured and beaten kicked and abused i have no family i have no love
the only one i care about is the god above
he is the one who can judge me not you
all because my spellings off oh boo hoo
are you that petty are you that cold
are you all just to old
well if you dont read my poems oh well
its not like your sending me to hell
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2005-07-21 00:01:30]
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Re: do you think i care
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 12:10:25 AM AEST
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Yes, you do care or you wouldn't get upset about it. A childhood like that hurts, but do you have to live it forever? I care, deal with it!
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Re: do you think i care
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 01:10:14 AM AEST
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this is a very sad poem and ididnt have a good childhood either my parents did not stay together and i didnt even know my real dad and when i try to contact him he told me he considers me dead ,,,, hope things get better for u ,,,, cause this poem is so true ... no one can send you to hell but god..
i am here if u want to talk..
hugssssssss butterflygirl40 |
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Re: do you think i care
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by Nightingale on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 04:11:18 AM AEST
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| Your poem has made me realised a few things i took for granted.. Thx and looking forward to read more from you.. Poems are meant to bring feelings to people.. You've succeeded, I'm touched by ur poem.. |
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Re: do you think i care
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:44:53 PM AEST
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| Nice write... |
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Re: do you think i care
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:14:34 AM AEST
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hello my new found friend,
I'm so happy u wrote this 'cause some people are so simple minded.
I'm sorry bout the sad part of the write but I give u 5 big stars times 100. Yo've made a very good point here.
U go now and keep up the awesome writing.
huggs, big smiles,
emy
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