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Love=God
Contributed by
BloodyTearDrops
on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:53:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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For Once She Is Happy,
For Once She Feels Loved.
She Can't Stop Smiling,
For She Knows There Is A God Up Above.
She Talks To Him In The Day,
Then Prays At Night.
She Loves Her God(Yes She Does),
And She Makes Sure She Is In His Sight.
She Listens To Her Music,
Singing It In Her Head.
She Goes To Her Room,
Then Lays On Her Bed.
As She Closes Her Eyes,
And She Just Lays.
She Says To God,
"Thank You For Letting Me Live Another Day!!"
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Re: Love=God
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by LolaWhite on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 01:05:11 AM AEST
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A good, honest write. We are blessed to have a God that loves us and never leaves us. Keep a strong faith and you will always see Him clearly in your life. A good write.
LW |
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Re: Love=God
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 01:43:41 AM AEST
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Just love that Christian attitude. Lovely poem, but your comment didn't do a thing to bring people to your God. Seems they forgot to teach a few things in Church camp.
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Re: Love=God
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 02:33:08 AM AEST
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Hmm i am glad your happy.but Rita is right.
what did they teach you in church camp? |
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Re: Love=God
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 02:46:27 AM AEST
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Sorry About The Thing On Top.
I Had A Bad Day.
But I Love This Poem.
It Made Me So Happy When I Wrote It!!! |
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Re: Love=God
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by CaseyRedman on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 06:19:34 PM AEST
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| good write i liked it i wrote a poem you would like called evil for good. it's about how only some of us know what it's like being bad real bad and turning to good |
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