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War
Contributed by
seci
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 07:18:37 PM in AEST
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i've put the pieces together but slowly
it has taken me longer than usual, but now its all clear to me
your love was a fake
i was weak at the time and i admitted it, i guess you push me to the edge just to see how much i can take
for years i struggle in the damn storm alone
no one helped me and you didn't care enough to lead me a hand
now i stand by your door with a picture of you and i
LOOK AT IT!
it was all a damn lie
i wrote love poems about you on the internet so people can understand the beautiful love i was in
i commited a sin
i made a fool of myself, but i'm going to put this love in the grave, i 'm going to nearly drown it to death
you said you love me, but i believe that was your love for, janay, emily, tonya , and tiffani
i cried for so long , and now since i got the puzzle figure out, its your turn to cry a river, your turn to walk alone in this storm
i can't count the number of bruises you left on me
i can't even remember the last time you made love to me and told me in my arms is where you wanted to be
i'm ready
i have my black boots on
my army suit on with my hair pulled back
my weapons are in my sack
you said i was a bore uh
well get ready
because its time for
WAR
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2005-07-20 19:18:37]
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Re: War
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by LolaWhite on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:49:31 PM AEST
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Oooooooo! POWERFUL and strong. It left a real impact on me. Good job and way to stand up for yourself. A unique and powerful piece.
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Re: War
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by LolaWhite on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:50:58 PM AEST
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One more thing....
I LOVED THIS PART!!
i have my black boots on
my army suit on with my hair pulled back
my weapons are in my sack
you said i was a bore uh
well get ready
because its time for
WAR |
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Re: War
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:37:38 AM AEST
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Way to go seci!!! You tell him girl! Get this loser out of your life. I love the way you expressed yourself in this write...Such fierce emotions...Very in your face, but moving too...LOVE that ending too : )
Nice job!
Scorp.
(Very proud of seci for moving on) |
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