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dreamin
Contributed by
systematiq
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 07:14:29 PM in AEST
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the main idea the american dream
white picket fence on the poarch eatin ice cream
c'mon now whos livin this dream
20 percent of americans smoke crack to release steam
and then the teens smoke weed
some of em do pills
a single mom wit no job cant afford the bills
kids on the block sellin drugs gettin cought ..
they get outta lock up
and try to get back on top
its crazy how the drug games like the rap game
one minute ya makin cash
next thing u kno ur on your ass
now ya juss lonely cuz ya freinds dont respect u
ya bout to go crazy cuz ya girl juss left u
kids wit semis and ounces in there pants learn to twist a blunt before thy can dance
smokin weed like religion ..
if u aint in reality wats the point in livin
no one gives me **** so wats the point in givin
money cant fix my problems or relieve my stress ... but it could buy me a pound a gun and a vest !!!
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Re: dreamin
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:20:09 PM AEST
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Well, there you have it, the American dream
Gee, I always dreamed of the white picket fence.. the dog inside the yard.. but wow.. and I never went as far as thinking eating icecream.. I need to review my american dream here.. lol.. thank you for the poem.. its great. Ok, so maybe not icecream.. maybe I might have to save up for that gun and vest ...the way things are going...
Hey great poem.. I learned something by reading this.
Yours truly,
Raquel Leah (Poetress)
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Re: dreamin
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 08:55:29 PM AEST
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Hey kid..
great rap-
you got the gift for sure..
I always told you that
I learned somethin' too..
(kids nowadays aint to be messed with.. lol)
lay down a top ten beat to this..and ya home free-
awesome bro.. friggin' awesome
Billy |
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Re: dreamin
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by nanb294eva on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:27:18 PM AEST
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your gonna be someone some day you write with your heart and that says something, not to many people can do that just keep writing and you will see. whats to come keep posting your work and watch what the people have to say. its nice james!
love mom |
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