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i remember your eyes
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:33:55 AM in AEST
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i remember your eyes
so beautiful and pure
there was a time in my life
i thought you were my cure
i remember your smile
with the same grace as your feet
so soft in each step
but you stumbled to meet
i remember your voice
so vague but still angelic
but you are just a memory
a forgotten relic
all the things you had said to me
are gone with time
for there once was a time
i thought you were mine
but no more no more...
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Re: i remember your eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:55:20 AM AEST
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| wow that was a touching write. very heartfelt. i can relate to this. christopher. |
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Re: i remember your eyes
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by LolaWhite on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:25:04 AM AEST
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My favorite part was;
i remember your smile
with the same grace as your feet
so soft in each step
but you stumbled to meet
This poem flowed nicely. A beautiful write.
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Re: i remember your eyes
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:45:02 PM AEST
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this reminded me of a person that was in my life...."all the things you had said to me
are gone with time" spoke very loudly to me, but hey, the whole poem did. it brought me back in time....
yes, i'm very fascinated with curiosity. everything i write has such a deep meaning inside of it. not many see it. most just see what lies on the surface. yes, my mind is a little phsycotic at times as you've seen...i rarely write about it though. we all seem to have that side to ourselves...even if some wish to deny it...the thoughts are still there....
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