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Anguish of Life
Contributed by
sride686
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:18:17 AM in AEST
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Dark Depths filled with blood
Dark cold waters that continue to flood
Pain inside filled with greed
Hate in me that continues to bleed
My vision goes black
As death is in site
Hate in me as I continue to fight
Questions flood with storms from the past
How long must I live
And this anguish last
Distrust in my words
With lies that I spoke
Pain in my voice
For my life is revoked
Deceit in my heart
That rips me apart
Drains out my life
So my pain can depart
Its taken away as darker I fall
Swimming in blood
As I fall from it all
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sride686
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2005-07-20 08:18:17]
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Re: Anguish of Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:29:49 AM AEST
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A very revealing and graphic account of life's
inhumanities 2 man, well written and
expressed poem, wish u well . . .
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Re: Anguish of Life
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by brew on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 09:35:41 AM AEST
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Yes this is very deep. The imagary in this, power and all. Thanks for posting, and good luck with the inner feelings of your self.
Brew~ |
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Re: Anguish of Life
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by Shyness on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:32:25 AM AEST
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| Very well writen poem. One that I will always remember. Hope everything is going ok I would hate for something to happen to you. I don't know you but I love your poem and look forward to reading more of them. So hang in there |
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Re: Anguish of Life
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:31:54 AM AEST
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very dark for sure! i like it a lot and was especially taken by the last stanza... i love the imagery! It doesn't seem as often you write these darker poems.. but when you do, they're very, very strong.
i hope all is well for ya and i look forward to more!
take it easy Steve
dw |
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Re: Anguish of Life
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by LolaWhite on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:34:04 AM AEST
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What more can I say? The last stanza is my favorite. Graphic imagary and truth from a talented soldier and poet. You are always in my prayers.
Love,
LW |
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Re: Anguish of Life
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 01:29:24 PM AEST
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wow Steve thats very deep and intense write so much said.I can see your pain and emotions through this poem.And quite dark too.
awsome job
take care
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Re: Anguish of Life
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 06:15:51 PM AEST
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Steve this is graphic, revealing and deep. You've expressed yourself so well in this. Very thought provoking and sad. I hope u find inner peace my friend.
You seem to write dark poems so well. But i do hope you'll be writing some happier pieces again.Take care soldier Steve and u r forever in our prayers.
Hugs,
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