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GoodBye My Love
Contributed by
JenJen
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 06:25:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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It's time to say goodbye
Goodbye to everyone I know
I love them dearly
They have become very close
I don't want to hurt your feelings
But it's time for me to go
As my life comes to its end
As the sadness of time grows short
As the sun is extinguished
So is my life
Copyright ©
JenJen
... [
2005-07-20 06:25:14]
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Re: GoodBye My Love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 06:49:03 AM AEST
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Very sad but wrirrtten well.
I do pray this is jus writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: GoodBye My Love
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 09:11:11 AM AEST
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A sad write that I pray never comes true
but very well done. Some writes take so
few words but truly say it all. Keep up
the good writes and I thank you for the
comment on my write….Steve |
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Re: GoodBye My Love
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by Shyness on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:21:30 AM AEST
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| Good poem but I hope it never becomes true, I know and knew many people who thought the same as you if you ever need to chat send me a message, you don't know me so you wouldn't have to worry about anything you said and I would listen Hang in there. |
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