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goodbye
Contributed by
KraZshyt
on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The first time I saw you I saw your soul in your eyes
Deep pools of brown and caring emotions
Your voice was smooth and deep
Talking to you was like talking to God
You knew everything
When you held me I could feel our bodies merge into one
being
Your kiss brought meaning to life
Your hands holding me made me feel safe
Your smell was sweet and clean
When you said I love you
I felt like I had met my one soulmate
In a way I had
After two beautiful years of learning about our selves,
love, and life
YOu broke my heart
In a sense you stole my soul
We were one
NOw that you are gone I didnt know who I was anymore
But now I am ready to say goodbye
Goodbye to your eyes, your smell, our talks.
Goodbye to windows and doors.
Goodbye to hugs and kisses.
Goodbye to eternal promises that are made to be broken.
Goodbye to our love.
Copyright ©
KraZshyt
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2003-01-10 23:40:00]
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Re: goodbye
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by chantel on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:59:01 PM AEST
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it takes a lot ot say goodbye it has taken me so far 1 year and i still havn't been able too this was very good it holds a lot of my life in it good job hope to see more thank you for sharing
chantel |
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Re: goodbye
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by gina on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 02:05:13 PM AEST
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| goodbye is the hardest thing , but i guess ur strong enough to say it which is good ...... gr8 write......GINA |
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