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the perfect infection
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 11:00:36 PM in AEST
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it passes on like an infection
striving for all perfections
scarred hearts reeking kindness
hidden here in the blindness
are you what you wanted to be?
is your love the only treasure in the sea?
your offspring are they happy too
do you know if they even love you
day after day its all the same
you go to work but they forget your name '
your an ant in this world and who cares
they step all over you and are in your hair
is this the perfection you found?
screaming inside but making no sound?
smiles hiding every last whole hearted tear
and never again lack that one fear
the perfect death
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Re: the perfect infection
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 11:07:51 PM AEST
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wow I like this one ! wat a great poem, great job...very good way of portraying the human species ;)
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Re: the perfect infection
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:28:37 PM AEST
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thank you for your comment. my poems have specific meanings to me, but as the days go by they change. my poems are whatever you want them to mean to you.
its so sad how we work each day and are nothing....we spend are whole lives working but what for??....we are ants....perfect description for human beings......
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