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If I Could Bottle Up Your Tears
Contributed by
LolaWhite
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:39:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I could bottle up your tears
I would take a sip each day
To taste the salty burn of love
That will never go away
If I could just for one moment spend
Another day with you
I would tell you all I had to tell
And do all there was to do
If I could be for just one blink
Inside of your mind's eye
Then I would never have to shed
These tears I often cry
If I could forever stay
Within your beating heart
My mind could finally be at ease
For we would never be apart
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LolaWhite
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2005-07-19 22:39:29]
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Re: If I Could Bottle Up Your Tears
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:51:43 PM AEST
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humm don't know if i'm the right comenter lol but a very compassionate write any way, love your work . . .
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Re: If I Could Bottle Up Your Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 11:01:13 PM AEST
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Awww this is so sweet and so touching..Loved it
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Re: If I Could Bottle Up Your Tears
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:09:26 AM AEST
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so beautiful it gave me a tear or two
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Re: If I Could Bottle Up Your Tears
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 07:19:14 AM AEST
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You have such great depth---and compassion. I was very moved by your poem in a good way and the title was wonderful.
This was beautiful, very much so.
Kie |
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Re: If I Could Bottle Up Your Tears
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:22:16 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful write my love and thank you for posting it for me. I love you and it feels so good to know I’m loved so much. This poem had so much love and had a much deeper side to it. You got some good comments on it. Keep up the writes and know I’ll be home soon from this place to hold you again and love you with all my heart once again. Love always your husband….Steve |
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Re: If I Could Bottle Up Your Tears
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:33:02 AM AEST
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| wow thats wonderful heartfelt and emotional i love it |
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Re: If I Could Bottle Up Your Tears
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 10:55:30 AM AEST
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Awww what beautiful sentiment...A very unique spin on love...I enjoyed this write, it flowed really well, and you worded it rather nicely...Good job.
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Re: If I Could Bottle Up Your Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 03:55:35 PM AEST
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| Very inspiring write, I miss you both, I am still praying for your family. Write to me to ease my mind, see my prayers are answered, well, and do I have doubt, no, the Good Lord is with you, watching over your beautiful family. Beautiful write, cleansing tears, tears of promise....keep that strong faith your family has... Huggs to you all. Raquel Leah |
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