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FeAr
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:56:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I do not want to lose you
now that i have found you
the fear dwells deep inside me
its locked away, it haunts me
I wander when you'll walk out
or when "we" will fade away
you look so deep inmy eyes
assuring me i have no reason to cry
but i've been here before,
and won't be able to heal anymore
The fear is still there
I fear your only here to hurt me
so much i don't see how you complete me
I fear you don't love me, its only a game
i know i should be ashamed of my fear
i fear all the things others have done
not seeing you are the one
all the pain love has put me through
I fear the worst from you
so i'm trying really hard
not to play that damn old fear cardqw
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2005-07-19 21:56:01]
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Re: FeAr
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by LolaWhite on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:45:57 PM AEST
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I can feel your anguished panic in this piece. I loved the way you wrote this. Good work.
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Re: FeAr
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:57:42 PM AEST
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i usual don't give advice but if an animal scences fear in you beware, be not afaid of love and it shall have no power but 2 do what it was meant to do, and that's love you, nice peice of poetry . . .
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