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Love Blind
Contributed by
hearts4pain
on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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this emotion is burning inside
this loneliness is too much
its dark and i stare into nothing
i know whats going to happen
im not scared
ill show you
take this feeling and cut it deep
until all the pain bleeds for everyone to see
your numb and you scream
this is love, this is love
the rage in me burns
as i imagine you with her tonight
i dont wanna believe the truth
but reality is here
and it hurts
take this feeling and cut it deep
until all the pain bleeds for everyone to see
your numb and you scream
this is love, this is love
into my dreams i go
the memories still fresh
its the night we first met
i lay with you until i fall asleep
i wake up and im alone, im alone
your gone
you still dont see me
whats it gunna take
you still dont see me
i will do whatever it takes
i take my feelings and cut them deep
so deep that all my anger bleeds
maybe one day you will see
this love
im numb and i scream
this is love
i hate you
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Re: Love Blind
(User Rating: 1 )
by brokenandinlove16 on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:34:40 PM AEST
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| WOW! that is really deep, good but deep, i like it alot! :-) |
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Re: Love Blind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:17:08 AM AEST
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| woah some dark words. i can even relate in places i think. nice work. |
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Re: Love Blind
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by needs_change on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:34:11 PM AEST
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| i ***** love this poem. it really hits home for me. it just.....***** rocks. awsome awsome job.keep it up |
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Re: Love Blind
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 11:09:21 PM AEST
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wow, i absolutely loved it. So beautiful, and dark... amazing write.
~natalya |
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