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LoVe ScArS
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:35:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The scars are still freash
they reside on my heart
not upon my fleash
this heart once torn apart
has been mended by lace
the scars will be here a while
mending in your long loving embrace
as love starts a brand new mile
The scars came when I was a child
found a love that i was sure would last
now that was a touch of mild
but that was in my past
you have looked deep within me
your the light at the end of the dark
with you I will always be
its more love than a flicker, or a spark
with you my love scars
start to mend and fade away
nights shared under the stars
a love strong enough to stay
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brokenwings
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2005-07-19 21:35:15]
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Re: LoVe ScArS
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by PHISHBATES on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 03:22:16 PM AEST
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love sux, i think it's over rated...
nice right though. |
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Re: LoVe ScArS
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:22:49 PM AEST
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I am glad that you will be able to heal those love sacrs. Love hurts and sometimes kills. Great poem though..
take care
christina |
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Re: LoVe ScArS
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by Fireheart on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 12:35:44 AM AEST
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| i love the first few stanzas. like they say time heals scars. n laughs too curs too (sorry i might mispell sumthing i suck at it) . love is complicanted of course thatz what love is. but what doesnt kill you makes you stronger. nicely done here. |
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