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Alone
Contributed by
dorkfish
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 07:43:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Feeling no one cares for you
Alone
Feeling no one is there for you
Alone
Feeling no one cares if you're hurting
Alone
Feeling no one would help you
Alone
Feeling no one sees
Alone
Feeling no one understands
Alone
Feeling no one cares for your saddness
Alone
Feeling no one cares you're............Alone
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Re: Alone
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 08:26:29 PM AEST
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NIce! I love the concept...and how you really drive home the feeling. So simple, yet so very effective...Well done!
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Re: Alone
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by SylviaWalters on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 06:00:44 AM AEST
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| simple, short, but effective, a lot of people could relate to that. Well done! |
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