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Not Angry Just Hot
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 06:12:23 PM in AEST
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Trying to do too much with too little
I leapt right into this awful thing
This recyclable garbage of conversational routine
Incited the language to revise what was meant
When I leapt right into the arms of death
I have the propensity to do some damage
The right to gain my fair share of revenge
The capacity and the endurance to fight you to the end
To the bitter composition that was my legacy
A predisposition inheriting this sacrificing quality
The point has been made many years before
A story has bent leant to a generation not yet born
The history of tomorrow is my current existing concern
Witnessing in horror what plagues a civilization torn
The sages who claim merit and prestige
Have steered me wrong
Their intent not to deceive
My intent is to leave, leave me alone
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Re: Not Angry Just Hot
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by Willowtre on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 06:30:28 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed your poem. I look forward to reading more of them. keep writing....your good. |
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Re: Not Angry Just Hot
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 07:24:02 PM AEST
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extreme write another reason why I alway read.Well done
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Re: Not Angry Just Hot
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 08:49:31 PM AEST
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Well your bitter words, and angst ridden emotions flowed quite easily throughout this write...As to be expected, you expressed yourself well. I think I have an idea what/who this is about...Maybe I'm wrong...Hopefully I'm wrong...Eeek! I just hope you know what you're doing, that's all...I'm always here if you want to talk my friend...Good job with this write jyss.
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