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Visions
Contributed by
Bones
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 05:47:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Disarray and confusion following insanity
Broken thoughts, fading serenity
Dehumanization and defecation of the mind
Leaving one another bleeding behind
Fallen and broken, laughing again
Illustrating another vision
Indecision
Taking matters into my own hand
Following my thoughts, creating new land
Time after time, tears following tears
Fountain of youth, killing the years
Happily laughing and dancing in the wind
Cover my eyes
Reap your lies
Telling the story meant to be told
Something new, but will never grow old
Timeless and unforgiving
Impure souls of the living
Hypocrites follow ignorance
Follow the inner glance
Lights of the lies breaking my sword
Breaking the unity of the demon horde
Strumming my own mind
Laughing at mankind
We all run away
Copyright ©
Bones
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2005-07-19 17:47:02]
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Re: Visions
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by Willowtre on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 06:33:34 PM AEST
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| your poem is awesome. look forward to reading more. |
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Re: Visions
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by brew on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 06:42:51 PM AEST
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very creative write.......deep , with differ emotions. Great write........Thanks for posting
Brew~ |
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Re: Visions
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:37:42 AM AEST
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great write, bones! i really enjoyed reading this one. it's also very true. good choice of picking the words, they went very well! great job, keep up the good work!
~sprints |
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