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Stuck in an Elevator
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:50:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Uh oh.
This could be bad.
I'm in between floors,
with no power.
I'm a sitting duck in this silver cage.
But she's here with me.
And even though we're total strangers,
she makes all the difference in the world.
...I hope we stay stuck here forever...
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thepizzaguy
... [
2005-07-19 13:50:46]
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Re: Stuck in an Elevator
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by brokenandinlove16 on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 02:33:25 PM AEST
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| The poem is short but it has a deep feeling to it. It made me feel almost as if i were there. And I took it as though they were strangers stuck together, they helped eachother to see that they weren't alone. It is a very strong poem. Good! |
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Re: Stuck in an Elevator
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by brokenandinlove16 on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 02:34:34 PM AEST
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| The poem is short but it has a deep feeling to it. It made me feel almost as if i were there. And I took it as though they were strangers stuck together, they helped eachother to see that they weren't alone. It is a very strong poem. Good! |
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Re: Stuck in an Elevator
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:39:03 PM AEST
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nice food for thought,
tasha |
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Re: Stuck in an Elevator
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by Evshrug on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 03:43:17 AM AEST
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| What are you going to do, eat her? Just kidding, I like it. Short & petite. Push push push! your limits. |
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