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out of nowhere
Contributed by
PHISHBATES
on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:24:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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been so long sense i've seen you,
when i close my eyes
right now it's a hazy image,
almost misty or foggy.
yet unexplanibly beautiful.
i do however remember the
witch like spell that left me
walking toward you with no
words of my own, beyond the
impressive hello---
my mind raced, all i could think was,
where have i seen this beautiful woman before?
i wanted to ask, but that
lines seen better years.
we parted company
within a minute.
i felt like i had
gotten nowhere
maybe i still have'nt
but if you came out of nowhere,
that's where i want to go..
Copyright ©
PHISHBATES
... [
2005-07-19 13:24:55]
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Re: out of nowhere
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:56:10 PM AEST
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very nice.. i like the lines describing how you're not able to say anything beyond "the impressive hello" so true.
good stuff, keep it up
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Re: out of nowhere
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:41:30 PM AEST
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nice write, liked it alot
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