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Fifteen
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:18:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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Seven years we’ve lasted long
We’ve good memories and bad
Through blissful times and blistered rhymes
Together happy, together sad
The days were hard on us we know
A guy, a love, a good friend dead
Many a tear shed in injustice
Cruel words have been said
I’ve done my fair share of guilt
And you’ve done the same
But even with our arguments
Neither of us are to blame
I sing to the stars on this day
A finality not, but a continuation
Your life far from pointless
Taken away be your desperation
Pain does happen; it’s part of life
You have endured for fifteen years
Happiness, sorrow, pain, and love
Friendship, distress, pleasure, and tears
All in all you’re my best friend
Believe me when I say to you
You are brilliant, AMAZING
In every single thing you do
You are beautiful with such a soul
Do not run away and do not hide
If you call out for help in a time of need
Know I will always be at your side
Hidden beneath pain is happiness
Find your beauty under your doubt
You have no clue how much you mean to me
I believe in you, believe in yourself
I love ya Casey, never forget
You can reach any dream
These seven years have been great so far
Let’s keep ‘em coming… happy fifteenth
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Re: Fifteen
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:26:25 PM AEST (User
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Very deep poem there blue_angel..
Have you ever considered writing for Hallmark cards.. or check out other areas..
I enjoy how you put your words together..
They can fit any type of emotional fair.
Keep writing.. great piece.. thank you for posting it.
Yours truly,
Raquel Leah (Poetress) |
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Re: Fifteen
(User Rating: 1 ) by sride686 on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:37:16 AM AEST (User
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A good write to a friend not one of my favorits of yours but it was good and I'm sure your friend will love to get it from you. take care and keep up the writes. friends like these are wonderful and I'm glad you have one....Steve |
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