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shar

Contributed by Jaycee on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 11:02:52 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

she's back from the dead
no that's not quite right
she's back from the north
i bet she put up a fight

the people of canada
with demeanor so calm
compared to ugly americans
were a cool soothing balm

her aerodynamic projects
may not have been best
but in good natured humor
in pieces they rest

with quick wit and sharp mind
she rejoins the blog
laser sharp perception
that cuts through the fog

it is for people like shar
for this blog i do write
and kara, kati and esper
composing a cluster so brite

Copyright © Jaycee ... [ 2005-07-19 11:02:52]
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Re: shar (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:28:58 PM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot, I found it interesting how you pulled the word 'shar' from 'sharp'. Though I may be wrong, from some of the word play in your poem I feel that shar, kara, kati, and esper aren't exactly people, but possibly stars, star constilations, satilites, or even that shuttle launch thingy they just did. Then again I might just be overthinking the poem. Great write!

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