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With You

Contributed by taurusgem1 on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 02:04:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

With you
Forgotten I lay, your arm
Distant, clutched into your quiet body
The unfriendly scent of a one night stand
Lingers, mixing into the air
This is not our first time here.

Inside my eyes scream
“Do You See Me!!?”
My pupils shrink with sadness
Disappearing with your
Steady breath
Sleeping soundly
Contracting
Hypnotic rhythm telling our story
Of the many nights before, all crashing
Into this moment
With you

Underneath the enormous blanket
Grayish blue quilted and warm
My body chills
Turning slowly, facing
Blank walls
Hospital white, glowing through the darkness
Laughing, whispering the truth
Still I long for your touch

Memory
Once soft demanding fingers
Sending blazing tingles
Into my soul
Smiles, slightly crooked and amused
Haunt me, daring to lie
False hope bursting
Through every door

Yet;
With you
Forgotten I lay

Copyright Â© taurusgem1 ... [ 2005-07-19 02:04:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by janzen on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 06:15:43 PM AEST
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nice

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