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Adonis
Contributed by
billy_corgan
on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:05:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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why must I be so loved?
to be as coarse as you are
to be as unhappy as they are
to light my candle in your flame.
and I must sit
sit.
waiting for the wax to drip
and harden on my feet where it splashes
till my legs are incased.
a wax Adonis.
Why must I be so loved?
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billy_corgan
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2005-07-19 01:05:57]
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Re: Adonis
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:17:12 AM AEST
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| this poem made me smile, and i know its not meant to...but its just rare to hear someone complain about being so handsome and loved. i think the imagery and the whole poem overall was great though |
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Re: Adonis
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by brew on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:33:16 AM AEST
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Well, we all should be loved...in many ways than one. I'll trade you?!lol Nah, Im sure there are many who love me.......and all. ! Liked this post. Was a differ of reading. Thanks
Brew~ |
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