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DONT FEEL GOOD.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:02:28 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

WHEN I GET UP IN THE MORNING.

I HAVE NO ENERGY..

MY BODY FEELS SO DIRTY.

AND I FEEL SO DROWSY.

IT TAKES ME A LONG TIME TO CARRY MYSELF FROM ROOM TO ROOM.

I DONT THINK CLEARLY WHEN I GET UP IN THE MORNINGS.

I BRAVELY TAKE MYSELF TO THE DELI.

TO ORDER ME SOME COFFEE.

BUT WHEN I GET TO THE DELI I AM NOT IN A CHATTY MOOD.

I TALK MYSELF INTO GETTING SOME CANDY.

THEN WHEN I GET ME SOME CANDY.

I WANT TO GO BACK TO THE COUNTRY.

AND I WANT TO GO BACK TO BE CRAPPY.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2005-07-19 00:02:28]
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Re: DONT FEEL GOOD. (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:31:37 AM AEST
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when you read my poem could you at least

comment me on my poems..

thanks butterflygirl40

Re: DONT FEEL GOOD. (User Rating: 1 )
by rosethorn100 on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:17:04 AM AEST
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This self struggling poem is obvious a deppresion poetry - you poem are good and simple but i think you need to express yourself more of what u feel inside and what go on your mind - trust me it will help you to understand yourself better - if you read my poem you understand what am talking about.

hope you feel better
god bless you
rosey

Re: DONT FEEL GOOD. (User Rating: 1 )
by shutterfly2004 on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:46:43 AM AEST
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This was a really good Poem.... Kepp up the good work

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