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Lady Night
Contributed by
Phantomdream
on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:58:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Defiant stars dazzle in her eyes,
as the greatorb of her necklaces soars higher,
and her voices are of gentle rustling,
babbling brooks,
and tiny creatures,
and her gown cascades,
in folds,
o'er hill and vale,
cloaking the world in darkness.
Copyright ©
Phantomdream
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2005-07-18 23:58:49]
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Re: Lady Night
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:45:15 AM AEST
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| I know this feeling I was just camping myself they could go on for miles! The stars are so beautiful by a camp fire! Christina |
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Re: Lady Night
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:20:36 AM AEST
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| Breath-takingly Beautiful. the imagery is amazing and the personification...is wonderful! loved every word,every pause. remarkable job! |
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Re: Lady Night
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by White_Rose_Vixen on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:54:02 AM AEST
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| Very deep. Loved it. Good job! |
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Re: Lady Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 05:47:06 AM AEST
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Fresh and lovely, Well done!! Short but moving...
Leia36 |
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