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Together
Contributed by
sride686
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Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 10:03:45 PM in AEST
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A beautiful thought
And a beautiful wish
Heart felt emotions
That turn into this
Dreams that come true
When I’m lost in your eyes
And warm in your arms
Is the place I hide
I see are love
In our daughters eyes
Emotions I find
That will never subside
Tears that fall
In eternal bliss
To think I’ve found
A love such as this
A family at last
Together as one
Lost in are arms
We can never go wrong
Forever in love
With a warm embrace
Forever in love
Lost in this place
~Steve~
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sride686
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Re: Together
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:40:15 PM AEST
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what a beautiful and loving write .once again you did good on this.
well done.
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Re: Together
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by LolaWhite on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:41:11 PM AEST
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I would be honored to be the first to comment on this poem. It brought tears to my eyes. I am so glad that you were able to see your baby. Having a child is the most amazing feeling in the world, and sharing the love you have for that child with your wife is one of the most amazing loves a person can ever feel. I loved the way this poem flowed. Again...words of truth. You speak from your heart and I love that about your poetry. Keep them coming Steve.
Your friend.
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Re: Together
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by brew on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:39:04 AM AEST
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Well seems you have a precious, treasure.......and some bliss with the whole. Do keep what you have, because many cant have . Nice write, for togetherness.
Brew~ |
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Re: Together
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:43:01 PM AEST
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Much congratulations to you and your family!! and a well written poem as well!
always a pleasure to read your stuff.
take care Steve
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Re: Together
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by CarolinaBlue on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:35:09 PM AEST
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Seeing your daughter of 6 months for the first time must've been a heavenly moment, I know being away from your family can be extremely hard. Your write was filled with pure emotion. Lovely!
~Blue~ |
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