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I Didnt Know
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 05:47:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I didnt think I needed you anymore
I thought I was over you
I didnt know how lucky I was until I lost you
Emptiness started to fill my lost and unknowned happiness
When I lost you
I made the bigest mistake in the world
Thought I didnt love you anymore
I'mstupid
I didnt even know my own feelings
I didnt know I needed you this much
Suicide thoughts run through my head
But the thoughts and memories or you
Over come those thoughts
But the more I think of you
The more I want to die
The more those razors want to slit across my wrists
I cut your name in my wrist
thinking about you the chance I missed
How stupid could I be
I didnt even know my own feelings
I didnt know how lucky I was
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2005-07-18 17:47:00]
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Re: I Didnt Know
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:07:52 PM AEST
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Wisdom does not discriminate, the young can inherit the leagacy as well as the old,
very revealing poetry, a scence of urgency
then the heart can be a most merciless
adversary . . .
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Re: I Didnt Know
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:25:26 PM AEST
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this is a good poem, but you may want to take a little more time .. there are some mistakes .. such as:
"Emptiness started to fill my lost and "unknowned" happiness
it should be unknown .. and there are some spelling errors that I guess the mods didn't pick up. But the poem would have more power and strength if the mistakes were corrected. It's a nice piece of writing.
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Re: I Didnt Know
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by angel_eyes70 on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:49:38 AM AEST
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Good Write And Forget About Him, Many More Guys Will Come Into Your Life And Youll Meet The One So Just Wait Patiently And You Will Get An Amazing Guy.
*Hugs And Kisses*
Kimmy |
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