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Have You Ever?
Contributed by
Niamhxxx
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Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 05:42:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Have you ever just felt like you don't want to be here?
You don't see the point you've had a bad year.
Your new friend is against you, and your old friends don't really care?
Have you ever just felt like you don't want to be here?
Have you ever just felt like you're never wanted?
By bad memories you are haunted,
Your newest memories make you feel numb,
Have you ever thought how you could be so dumb?
Have you ever fallen in love with the completely wrong person?
Destroying your heart without even giving a reason,
Even though you've been cheated you still love this man,
Do you not hate him because you don't think you can?
Have you ever felt foolish like your never right?
Giving up the battle without putting up a fight,
Wondering what people are thinking when you don't have a clue,
Have you ever felt that you don't know what to do?
Have you ever felt like you lost a best friend even though you haven't?
Forgot that they were there, replaying the same habit,
Think of all bad things, thinking they weren't there,
Have you ever had secrets you forgot to share?
Have you ever tried to kill yourself, to find a way out?
You keep calm and collected but want to scream and shout,
Take all the bad things and never the good,
Have you ever said I cant when you should have said I could?
Have you ever just felt like you don't want to be here?
Trapped by all your childish fears,
The world around you destroyed by friends and foes,
Have you ever felt like you just wanted to go?
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Niamhxxx
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2005-07-18 17:42:38]
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by Unbreakable on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:53:45 PM AEST
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| I can relate to your poem so well. I actually wrote something very similar a while ago with the the exact same title. Needless to say, the title of your poem caught my eye. Anyway, you did a very good job of portraying your feelings, and the poem has a good flow. Great work, keep it up... |
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:21:24 PM AEST
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Good rhyme development; and yes.. I can relate .. I think everyone can.
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