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broken agin
Contributed by
tweaks2004
on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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His thoughts are blazeing
hearts raceing
hes wondering what he ever saw in her
All thats brought up turns to anger
cause hes alone
with no one
cause he bought into it when she saud she would never leav him
but he bottles all the ***** he feels inside once agin
like he allways dose
he just cant live with his reality, what was
Hes moved on to another
hes treating the girl that he onced loved like everyother
everyother ***** that told him he was ugly
everyone who brought him down off of his cloud back to reality
now the ****** that stole his love once is at it agin
thats when all this **** started over agin
but hes not going to take it
he runs to his house, grabs a bat, knife, and some other *****
walks up to the ******, beats his ****ing face in
slashes and stabs him over and over agin
cause hes not going to take this **** ever agin for as long as he lives
hes not going to have his heart broken agin
The little ***** ends up in the hospital
but the kid who did it dosent care,cause for once he gave something his all
hes in jail fjor attempted murder
he dont cause he didnt lose her
she stands by his side, waiting for his hearing
sentenced to comunity service, and a bomb a** fine, his newly won friends start cheering
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2003-01-10 20:00:00]
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Re: broken agin
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 03:19:30 AM AEST
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Well I can't say I have ever felt this angry before. It was pretty good although it was kinda broken up by all the swear word blockers. Whats a 'bomb ass fine' by the way?
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Re: broken agin
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by tweaks2004 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 04:02:21 PM AEST
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| its a big fine srry i couldnt think of anything else :) |
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