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Unnatural Habitat
Contributed by
PuppetEcho
on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 05:09:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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mamma bird
broke baby bird's wings
now they are safely secured
in the nest
mamma bird
sings all day long
but she's out of key
she never learned how to fly
baby bird
watches other birds
soar through the sky
but he has nowhere to go, but down
baby bird
sings all day
can't fly
and here he'll stay
in the rotting nest
this dying tree
in the winter sky
there he'll be
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Re: Unnatural Habitat
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:16:06 PM AEST
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OMG, I have known people like this. Afraid of their own shadow and the big wide world. So afraid they cheat their children by teaching them the same misquided thoughts. Very sad this piece. Makes my heart ache.
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Re: Unnatural Habitat
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by Lips on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 01:20:09 AM AEST
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| This is the most beautifully sad poem I have read today. Your words orginal and ring true for so many. Thankyou for sharing! |
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