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Nuit Sombre
Contributed by
bittersweet315
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Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 04:24:21 PM in AEST
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Soft shimmer
amongst the dark backdrop
radiating precision,
a sense of comfort
in the raw night
washing over
blanketing in warmth
all thoughts merge together
into dreamless sleep
Copyright ©
bittersweet315
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2005-07-18 16:24:21]
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Re: Nuit Sombre
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:50:18 AM AEST
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Very nice write,in fact excellent!
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Re: Nuit Sombre
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by sillysal on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 01:31:41 PM AEST
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I'm not exactly sure of your meaning here ... it's a little mysterious. What is the 'soft shimmer', a thought, a tear ... it is bittersweet but I'd enjoy it more if the mystery were revealed :)!
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Re: Nuit Sombre
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by pureheart07 on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 10:17:27 PM AEST
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| Umm no offnisve, but what was the piont of that u need more detial othere then that it was good |
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Re: Nuit Sombre
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:04:51 PM AEST
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Repeating your title was a mistake. Using 'raw' was another - it detracts from the effect you are trying to create. I thought it was over-explicit in describing the night, but vague in describing what it applied to.
Keep writing,
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