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Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:45:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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this is something
that i never say
i never tell anyone
that i'm not okay
that is a secret
i bare on my own
as i cant trust anyone
i feel so alone
this is something
that i never do
i am never me
whilst infront of you
i pretend i'm happy
although im not
just to try make
my problems forgot
this is something
that i'll never be
i'll never be loved
because i am me
i look in the mirror
and i loath the sight
as i always do wrong
but never right
this is something
that i'll never see
i'll never see smiles
if people think of me
as i bring saddness
to all those around
and so with this thought
i drop dead to the ground
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2005-07-18 11:45:40]
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Re: something
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by justme03 on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:58:13 AM AEST
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WOW! this is a really awesome well written poem and i think the title fits well. i really liekd the flow of it and i can realte cuz i feel this way a lot. i wish u well. love , hope, and peace. HUGS
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Re: something
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:14:27 PM AEST
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| im not sure exactly what to say, except for that i loved it. |
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Re: something
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by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:17:21 AM AEST
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| yet again i cant think of any words to do it justice |
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