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Forbidden
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:40:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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My eyes mourn over the death of a memory,
Bitter ejaculations of sweet sorrow…
I still taste your saccharine kiss,
Your succulent tongue of unbridled desire,
Your hidden soul full of endless mystery…
I still taste and feel
YOU,
Completing every part of me…
Reality, with her thousands of ugly masks,
Slaps me hard in the face,
Her black laughter tormenting me as all of my illusions wither away,
Like the lunar rose that once bloomed inside my soul…
My heart is pregnant with love,
Eternal adoration meant for a poet’s perfect dream,
And when slumber steals my consciousness without asking,
You are the only one I see…
Your essence perfumes my clothes,
I can smell it at night, when recollections of you are most vivid…
I am adorned with white whispers of your gaze,
Trembling as the seduction of your words caress every curve,
Like your tender hands with the colorful voices…
Oh, such searing pleasure, such tantalizing ecstasy…
The torrents of memory beat me senseless,
And the mirror shatters with a last sigh of, “I am you…”
As I lay, battered and broken by the iron fists of truth…
I cannot have you,
Nor can you have me,
The way we both want each other…
Trouble, beyond any mortal comprehension,
Languishes confidently on Future’s throne,
Waiting for weasel eyes to discover us in the throws of passion,
And like a child who had snot for lunch,
Point towards us with a green finger and scream, “Death!”
Could I, with my baby hands, 200 year old eyes, and dying pen,
Express to you just how much it kills me to tell you…
We must end this…
Could I, with my bleeding eyes and wilting heart,
Turn away from your luscious kiss?
Not perish sweetly under your infinite stare?
Shrug with indifference as you touch my flesh?
No… I can’t.
I can’t stop loving you,
But I’m loving something prohibited,
I am dancing the forbidden dance,
And as much as it entices me with its flirty glances and pouty lips,
Its promises of all-consuming gratification,
For both of our sakes, I must untangle myself from this mutual lust…
I made the appointment today,
At 2:45 a.m. (Insomnia still plagues me…)
My heart will have an abortion…
All that will be left is a tattered womb of taboo desires,
And another worthless fetus of a love that couldn’t be…
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-07-18 11:40:10]
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Re: Forbidden
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by justme03 on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:04:39 PM AEST
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WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!
Such a beautiful , extremely well written poem. this is awesome and i cant think of nething to say except wow lol
i really like this.
luv, ~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Forbidden
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:44:01 PM AEST
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All i can say is to call this a poem would be
would be an insult, and a masterpeice would be to reduntant, i'll call it as i see it, and i base my coment on your headding in the
subject explanation, 4get your writting ability
that in it self would equal a renissance
paiting, but the tittle and the wisdom " when
you love somthing that is forbidden, you can
do noting but let it go " to bad eve didn't
possed this wisdom we might not be in the
mess were in today, be that as it may in a
phrase? " TRUTH" of biblical a
proportion . . .
((((stephy)))) Ben |
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Re: Forbidden
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:33:11 AM AEST
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WOW I AM AMAZED! The extended use of
metaphors was just mind-boggling. I don't
know what to say because your talent just
leaves me quaking in awe. I can relate to the
insomnia that you often write about since I
haven't been getting much sleep either. Yeah
this was just a gem of a write.
*Roses for a hurting friend*
Joel |
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Re: Forbidden
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 06:26:43 AM AEST
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| this is incredible, well done |
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Re: Forbidden
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:42:17 AM AEST
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| Just going over writes I've missed ..brilliant as usual soul sistah! for your age ... wow ..... do you do well in English lit? I hope so ... unless you're like my grandaughter Alyssa..she's a fabulous artist and she flunks art .. doesn't like to "draw on demand..? LOL ... lazy little so and so....:-P |
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