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the surrounding darkness
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 09:25:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the darkness of this world surrounds me
catching me in an ever lasting storm
forcing me to live my life in shadow
making me inside feel torn
i cant escape
in hell there's no light
its all my fault
i should have tried harder to do right
the darkness of this world surrounds me
filling each corner of my soul
stripping away all feelings
so that i am no longer whole
am i still alive
even though i feel nothing?
or am i no longer
someone, somebody, something
the darkness of this world surrounds me
leaving no room for bliss
i've so many sins
i difinitly deserve this
o when will light
fill my heart at last?
when will all the saddness
be a thing of the past?
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xXxmegsxXx
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2005-07-18 09:25:11]
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Re: the surrounding darkness
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by JenJen on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 09:29:30 AM AEST
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:'(:'( very sad:'(:'(
but very touching!! i will remember that poem for the rest of ma life (nxt 10mins) lol
beautiful!!
Luv
JenJen
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Re: the surrounding darkness
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by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:18:21 AM AEST
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| wot jenny sed |
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Re: the surrounding darkness
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:21:39 AM AEST
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gemz, ur memory's not THAT good!! lol
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