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Healing
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
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Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 01:32:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Open your eyes
Let me see inside
All the secretes you've
Tried so hard to hide
Allow me to enter places untold
Beginning a journey of healing
Layer by layer heart unfolds
Revealing a deeper feeling
Remove the mask,
break down the walls
The beauty within begins shining
Surrender to the whispered calls
Between your heart and mine
Allow our unburdened souls to soar
Two hearts reunited will be divine
Faith, trust and honesty the cure
For all that ails the heart and mind
Copyright ©
LoveStruck_Hippie
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2005-07-18 01:32:40]
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Re: Healing
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by emystar on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 02:04:22 AM AEST
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An awesomely beautifull masterpeice of truth.
Very good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Healing
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by Asthenia on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 02:33:02 AM AEST
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| this was very beautiful, i enjoyed every line...awesome |
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Re: Healing
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:25:51 PM AEST
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"Surrender to the whispered calls
between your heart and mine
Allow our unburdened souls to soar..."
Nice! I enjoyed this write. Keep it up!
Scorp. |
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Re: Healing
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:59:36 AM AEST
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Open your eyes
Let me see inside
If he opens his eyes ..how does that allow You to see?
just a little question ... you could maybe say ..
open your eyes and look deep inside ..
don't allow yourself to hide .. or something .. |
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Re: Healing
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:04:57 PM AEST
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| Hi Shannon. First my (belated) welcome to YPDC (I have been hanging elsewhere mostly ;-) This is a beautiful poem, lots of heartfelt emotion! *hugs* and Welcome to here! Blessings, Julie (or Jules as Naz likes to say). |
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Re: Healing
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 06:47:46 PM AEST
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A very healing poem indeed. There is a soft loving quality to this poem. I depict a tone of reverence and hope, a gentle encouraging without any demands.
A beautiful poem, Shannon
Will/Terry |
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Re: Healing
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:03:26 PM AEST
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Kind of ironic that we both did a poem on healing, albeit they're very different focus. This is a beautiful poem with a good rhythum and flow. A wonderful message about letting your guard down so that you may be united in a closer and loving union.
A very pleasant read, well done Shannon
Will/Terry |
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Re: Healing
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:04:38 PM AEST
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| Shannon, Loved your message here. Beautiful write. I have a sweet hippie deadhead friend named Shannon that lives out in Pennsylvania. You made me think of her. Loved the write. Thanks for sharing, my hippie sister, Laura |
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Re: Healing
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:39:41 PM AEST
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| Yet again I have found myself to be envious of you. Loved it |
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Re: Healing
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by priss on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 01:49:41 AM AEST
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| wow, beautifully written! loved every line. |
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