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''Sweet Hunger''
Contributed by
Smooth
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Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I want to suck on your bottom lip, and taste your sweetness,
I want to swim in your beauty, and bask in the light of your soul.
I want to hold you in my arms, I want to enjoy all your charms.
I want to feel your heart touch mine, I want to repay it back in kind.
I want to sense your skin, I want the goosebumps to win.
I want to run my finger down your spine, I want your scent to help me unwind.
I want to taste you shiver, I want you to want me to stop never.
I want you to scream out my name, I want to whisper your's the same.
I want to drive you over the edge, I want sweet paradise, to you this I pledge.
I can give you what you want, I can touch you where you need, I can help you taste the fire, your inhibitions will be freed.
If you trust in your heart, trust in how you feel, you'll never be wrong,
it is our minds that imprison our soul's sweet song.
Smooth
Copyright ©
Smooth
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2003-01-10 18:00:00]
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Re: ''Sweet Hunger''
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:40:01 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful, very well wrote! |
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Re: ''Sweet Hunger''
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 10:29:40 AM AEST
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| well written full of passion i liked this one very much..looking forward to more writes |
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Re: ''Sweet Hunger''
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by Leonicia on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 12:30:38 PM AEST
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I love this, this poem it takes my breath away. It's so honest and erotic, and yet soo sweet and tender...just like you.
Always,
me |
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Re: ''Sweet Hunger''
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 05:51:52 PM AEST
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| Sigh ... I love your poetry. |
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Re: ''Sweet Hunger''
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by FireStorm12 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:13:44 AM AEST
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| Very nice...I really wish I could get my soon to be exwife to feel that way about me again. Nice passion, nice expression. I enjoyed it throughouly...or however you spell it...LOL...nice work |
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Re: ''Sweet Hunger''
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by OreO on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 02:13:11 AM AEST
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And the bittersweet moment that lays upon your lips, that steals the very essence of eternity's true sealed kiss...Beautiful write Matthew...it's nice to see you writing again .....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: ''Sweet Hunger''
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:12:44 PM AEST
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| ahhhh....beautiful........... |
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Re: ''Sweet Hunger''
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:34:33 PM AEST
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| this is the most beautiful poem Ive ever read, it speaks in a very touching way |
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