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seduction by moonlight
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:52:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Thinking of your touch
I shiver
a chill runs up my back
You graze me softly
leaving behind
a crimson trail
I have been longing for this
its been to long
since last we met
I know I said I wouldnt do this
I said I would stop
That I didnt need this
But you seduce me
gleaming innocently
in the moonlight
I walk to you
and with you
Ill end my life
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vampyrekiss
... [
2005-07-17 22:52:21]
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Re: seduction by moonlight
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by emystar on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 11:05:52 PM AEST
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Great writing as always.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: seduction by moonlight
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by StoneAngel on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:31:20 AM AEST
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| I read this and at first i thought this is me except when i got to the end i realized its a suicide poem. its so sad. |
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Re: seduction by moonlight
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 04:04:12 AM AEST
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woa very intense write
well done |
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