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Just Let Go of Me
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:23:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If you could just let go,
I could do just so
If you would let go of me
Then we both would see
How easy I could let go and fall
We’d see that I can let go of it all
If you would just let go of me
And just leave me be
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Re: Just Let Go of Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 11:27:41 PM AEST
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Yikes! This sounds kind of grim Sprints...Is everything okay? I must say, I hope that person doesn't let go, if you're really feeling this down...Hope all is well. As for the poem; you certainly got your point across...even in so few words. Keep it up, and if you ever want to talk, pm me...okay?
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Re: Just Let Go of Me
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by Shyness on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 10:43:09 AM AEST
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| Wow. Your poem hits home I knew someone who use to talk like that and I hope you don't end up like them. If you ever wanna chat just send me a message. |
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Re: Just Let Go of Me
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by Bones on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 05:27:50 PM AEST
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Very dark and emotional, yet so short. Odd how something so small can produce a large message. Very good poem though.
Peace,
Bones
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Never Let IT Go |
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Re: Just Let Go of Me
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by Bones on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 05:28:21 PM AEST
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Very dark and emotional, yet so short. Odd how something so small can produce a large message. Very good poem though.
Peace,
Bones
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Never Let IT Go |
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