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Sleep Tight
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 08:49:56 PM in AEST
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Partial dread, resistance dead
my anxiety is growing
(But in a good way)
Freedom found, new hopes abound
the clock is ticking louder
(But in a good way)
Mourning lust, ashes to dust
feverishly awaiting the moment
(But in a good way)
Temptress haunting, her love flaunting
passion hot like fire
(But in a good way)
Feel the burn, sexual yearn
taste the desire greeting your lips
(But in a good way)
Slow then fast, orgasmic blast
well deserved sleep tonight
But in a good way ; )
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 09:21:28 PM AEST
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| WOW- That really really stings....BUT IN A REAL GOOD WAY |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 09:24:35 PM AEST
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I am loving this write. You vampy little scorpy, you. lol
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by bgj on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 09:49:48 PM AEST
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Hey, that's pretty cool. And I mean that in a good way!
bgj |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:43:11 PM AEST
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very well written! of course, anything you write always turns out good. good choice of words, keep up the good work!
~sprints |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by LolaWhite on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:55:25 PM AEST
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Nice! It's always in a good way ;o) Aaaahh the memories this brings back.
Thank you for the kind welcome to YPDC. I look forward to many more poems and comments.
Lola |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 11:56:40 PM AEST
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Lovin' this ... and yes "In a good way"
Very captivating write.
Shannon
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:35:19 AM AEST
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Very nice scorp nice rhythum to it well expressed . . .
Ben |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 03:23:22 AM AEST
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Wow!!! Now that was really awesome!
"Feel the burn, sexual yearn
taste the desire greeting your lips"
Now that really bothered me ;-} but in a good way :D
{Woo---goes to opTIMum sleep}
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by brew on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:47:03 AM AEST
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spicy, and slighly sensual.........very good. flowed and told.....but not in a bad way. Thanks for posting.
Brew~ |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:43:22 PM AEST
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Very tastefully done..... You go grrl!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by Kie on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 06:59:30 PM AEST
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Well (obviously) you have a much more exciting life than I!!
I thought this was one of your very best.
Impressed...
Kie |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by freckle on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:07:12 PM AEST
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I liked this Scorp. Nice job, good pace to the flow....great, vivid descriptions....good job girl!
C |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:18:05 PM AEST
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I was going to comment with a play on words..but how original would that have been..lol
Good to see you happy-
Great write Scorp.
B |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 09:25:30 AM AEST
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| Well Scorp its been awhile sense I’ve been around but I see your still writing as beautiful as ever. I see you met my wife she is awesome and then poem brings me thoughts of her and I together when I was on leave :). great write as always scorp and I thank you for your comments on my work. Take care and keep up the great writes….Steve |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:56:33 PM AEST
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You go girl! You never ever cease to amaze me. What more can I say? Simply written to perfection.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:22:59 AM AEST
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| i think i like poems without spice ::wide eyes:: ::goes off to wash mind with soap:: |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by UnmovedMover on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:22:14 PM AEST
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| It had a nice flow and rhythm to it. It was a good poem, in a good way. (if everyone else can use that joke so can I) |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 17th August 2020 @ 04:03:13 PM AEST
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| Gulp! |
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Re: Sleep Tight
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 17th January 2021 @ 02:37:23 AM AEST
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| I love this, but in a good way............ |
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