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°°°Lipstick Love°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
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My lipstick is chocolate and flavored so sweet
Someone special can take it forever keep
You dream as my tongue slithers upon my lips
You listen to my words and you imagine my hips
You take a deep breath as you picture in color
My lips full and wet upon yours to smother
I saved my chocolate kiss once upon a time ago
Other things were more important this i now know
So my Lipstick Love i will hold back no more
And i will test my heart that once was torn
If true love's kiss could set me free
I would then always know someone needed me
So to offer my Lipstick Love passions do grow
If you stop for a moment and listen you'll know
You picture me dancing out under the rain
With my Liptstick Love dripping without any pain
I ask to the world who wants keeps to my heart
To seep through this mask Lipsticks drawn so smart
And if you get past it and you see me inside
Then perhaps one day i can be your Lipstick Bride
Copyright ©
OreO
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2003-01-10 17:20:00]
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:29:49 PM AEST
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| very cute Oreo, but chocolate lipstick, I don't know |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:19:35 PM AEST
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wow i liked this one a lot good work made me smile after a tough day
Thanks
Shari |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:46:45 PM AEST
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| Wow this was so neat I liked this write of yours Oreo! I need some of this Lipstick for my hubby he loves CHOC.! LOL Christina |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by NotBagheadX on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 07:34:40 PM AEST
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| wow I really liked this one.I wish the girls I went out with had chocolate lipstick : ( |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by spooky on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 10:02:33 PM AEST
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| NICE,,,,,,chocolate,,,,,just kidding,,,well wrutten oreo,,it would be nice t o taste chocolate lips,I had strawberry,,it wasn't bad,,thanks you,oreo,,great thought,,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 10:58:32 PM AEST
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:>) Well grrl..you know me...and what I would make of this...lmao.... maybe we'll talk soon...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by Ronald on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:17:07 PM AEST
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| Wow! You're really a good poet. nice poem! Thanks for submitting this wonderful poem. You're so wonderful! |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by wordsy on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 07:03:49 AM AEST
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Chocolate, Hmmmmmm LOL.
A very nice read,
wordsy. |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by Jayraja on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 01:35:16 PM AEST
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Why Oreo, You still single? Not with that Lipstick love dripping chocolates baby, Nope
Better watch out or you will be hooked before you know it :) :) :)
Love from India ~ Joel ~ |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by gina on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 02:50:49 PM AEST
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waw , first u said ur "cookie" and now "chocolate lipstick" hehe anymore candies ur hiding there girl ...lol...
hehe i enjoyed this one a lot , different style....
gr8 write ....GINA
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 03:58:14 PM AEST
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| Oreo ... I've read this many times and was waiting to see what other comments were made to see what message people drew from it. But chocolate seems to be the theme! I know there's more to it than that, but I'm still trying to decide what that is :))) An excellent poem - it's got me thinking! |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 03:03:33 PM AEST
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HI OREO.
YOU SURE HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS,CHOCOLATE IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE
FLAVERS.GOOD WRITE,VERY IMAGINATIVE KEEP IT UP.RICHARD CAMPBELL |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 03:14:57 PM AEST
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you always write provocative but sensible poetry.....this is a very very good example of what i'm talking about. this one's definately one of my favorites that you've written.
InexactExactness |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 03:32:26 PM AEST
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This was very passionate and fast paced I liked the middle stanza the best. This was well written I liked the rhyme scheme and line thing. lol. Keep up these poems
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 08:42:22 PM AEST
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| WoW!!! Very, sensual... almost erotic! I'm reading this over and over.... I love it!!! Great Write, write more like this :) |
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Re: °°°Lipstick Love°°°
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by rapnificent on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 08:44:59 AM AEST
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| You took something commonand brought out its romance, on a deeper level. |
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