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Dad
Contributed by
countrychck
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 04:30:23 PM in AEST
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You really just don't understand
Exactly how much you mean to me
Everything you say or do
Has a huge impact on me
When you're mad at me
I feel as though my world
Is heading for the end
And I fall into depression
When you're happy with me
I feel as though I could fly
That nothing can bring me down
I wish it could always be like that
But it never is
You just have to understand
That your actions and words
Take their toll on me
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2005-07-17 16:30:23]
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Re: Dad
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by shelby on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 06:12:31 PM AEST
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very honest write and sometimes they dont understand. I love my dad to pieces but within a sentance length he can give me a lashing that would be worse than a slap in the face words can do great damage specially coming from dads with a sword for a tongue
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Re: Dad
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by Kamal on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 09:08:37 AM AEST
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| I hope when my daughter grows old enoughto talk she writes something that sweet like you did.... |
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