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Chocolate Covered Strawberries
Contributed by
brew
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 03:24:52 PM in AEST
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Choc covered stawberries,
They are not covered if you havent one to help you dip
They do not have the sweetness
Upon ones lips, with out another to help eat
No one there to help remove the sweet taste
To take a gentle finger and remove the juice from the face
To hold in one hand
And feed with another
To make the enjoyment be eroctic and sensual
By biting into a choc covered stawberry
Knowing it is has to be shared by two, not just one
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Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries
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by shelby on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 04:11:00 PM AEST
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oooooo you said a sweet mouthful with this write creative!
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Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 04:39:47 PM AEST
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Yes, definitely more enjoyable with two people...You can keep the chocolate though...I'll have my strawberries without thanks ; )
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Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries
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by LolaWhite on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 11:01:15 PM AEST
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What I wouldn't do for a chocolate covered strawberry. I would be selfish and eat them alone...more for me that way. ; )
I liked it! Good work.
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Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries
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by bernard on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 01:00:54 PM AEST
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| To have both Brew is not impossible after seventy five years I know. Perhaps you try too hard when dipping. Nice poem 5/5 from bernard. |
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Re: Chocolate Covered Strawberries
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by Writting_Fever on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 05:02:33 PM AEST
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Mouth-watering! Very sensual I loved it. Besides.....strawberries are my favorite food!
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