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Thoughts on a train
Contributed by
Mangs
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 02:13:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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The fields passed by me, in the rain...
As if they knew I was gathering my thoughts, on a train.
Bunches of trees waved their branches idly in the misty breeze,
Standing with courage enough, to bring this man to his knees.
They grew obscure through the 12 inch window pane,
As if they knew I was gathering my thoughts, on a train.
Someone once said, that if you looked closely you could see the sands of time,
As I looked at the ground that passed me by
Searching for the sands that were mine.
I looked down and saw a lily beming through the haze,
Shining as if it had figured out its place in the maze.
The little lily had everything that eluded me...
Someone to love, Something to be.
Running away from reality somehow seems so vain,
But I'm alive, As long as I can gather my thoughts,
On a train....
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2005-07-17 14:13:37]
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Re: Thoughts on a train
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by brew on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 03:15:16 PM AEST
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Never done that on train, but i like getting in my truck and turning music up high and driving. Going to actual do that soon, but my venture will take me to the ocean......and I use that as a serentity.....the ocean is a clamness.So I am taking an 8 hr drive, to focus,and get a reality ck this week. Wonderful, and heart felt write.
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Re: Thoughts on a train
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 05:36:30 AM AEST
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I dont do this on a train but i do when i go on very long walks. you have such a beautiful way of expressing your emotions with your words.
love you always
princess |
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