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How Many Licks Does It Take?
Contributed by
CarolinaBlue
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 03:32:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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~xXx~
I undress you
Eager to taste of your flesh
Aroused by your darkened heart
My lips meet your body
Slowly, my tongue glides over you
Swirling around, in our own private "tongue and cheek"
dance that seems to last forever
You tease me and tempt me
Caressing my lips with your touch of sweetness
In and out...........out, then in again
Melting away as your juices leave a sticky sweet
explosion of flavor in my mouth
And a deep longing...
to once again...
Taste of your Tootsie Roll heart
Copyright ©
CarolinaBlue
... [
2005-07-17 03:32:48]
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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take?
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by thumper on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 04:58:04 AM AEST
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Wow! I never thought of Tootsie Pops that way before! Great poem! Loved it! Peace.
Thumper ; o) |
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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take?
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by MomentInTime on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 06:15:55 AM AEST
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If only Toosie rolls could speak for themselves..............
Delightful
Jordan :o)) |
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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take?
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by thepizzaguy on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:06:56 AM AEST
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| You make Tootsie Rolls sexy. I'll never look at one the same way again, haha, great write! |
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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:08:46 PM AEST
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Very nice write blue lovely mehaphorical writting . . .
Ben |
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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take?
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by brew on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:27:38 PM AEST
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what a ......well use the imagination for all. Wonderful write, had me going for a bit. Where do you come up with these ideas? lol
Brew~ |
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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take?
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:34:56 PM AEST
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WooHoo!! You tell 'em grrl.....
Loved this
Jenni |
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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take?
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 02:46:09 PM AEST
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Wow....who's the inspiration for all these sexy writes?? Lucky guy! lol
Another nice write : )
Scorp. |
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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take?
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:31:22 PM AEST
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Well Blue..the title was screaming at me..lol
and after I clicked..my monitor melted..
and I, shortly thereafter-
PHEW!
Nice innocent last line-
"Tootsie Roll Heart"
passionate..well written
B
(time for a cold shower) |
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Re: How Many Licks Does It Take?
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by priss on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:49:57 PM AEST
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| sexy poem. i like the part "your juices leave a sticky sweet explosion of flavor". sounds like it was fun. great poem! |
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