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Order
Contributed by
PoisonousPyscho
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 01:10:23 AM in AEST
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Order
Everything has to be in order
The order in which I love
The order in which I cry
The order of what I do
The order of how I die
Everything is out of order
The way I loved
The way I cried
The things I did
The way I died
Everything does not need an order
Because I am gone
My thought don’t matter anymore
And order is just a dream
Everything has to be in order
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Re: Order
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by girlxwithxpen on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 01:18:37 AM AEST
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| If your thoughts don't matter then what is the purpose of the poem? I'd say your thougths do matter. And I'm not quite sure what you mean by this and that have to be in order. |
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Re: Order
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 10:55:50 AM AEST
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love it...
so true!
"Everything does not need an order
Because I am gone
My thought don’t matter anymore
And order is just a dream"
i love it......i can't say anything else!!!
- Bethani - |
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Re: Order
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by europeanprincess on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 10:28:23 PM AEST
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| totally different. i love it. things are not what they always seem and this poem showed that. thank you for sharing. |
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