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Reality Check

Contributed by fastpitchqt on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:16:18 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

What do you want from me?
You confuse my mind
You play with my heart

When I’m away you say you miss me and want to be with me
But when I’m right in front of you its like I’m invisible
You don’t see me, its like I’m not there

The calls are few and spread apart
I’m usually the one who makes the effort
What does that say about you?

You tell me you love me
But I don’t know if I believe it
The tone in your voice, the look in your eyes
How do I know you mean what you say?

I want to be with you
But I’m tired of feeling this way
I’m tired of feeling unwanted
I’m tired of feeling second to someone or something
I’m tired of feeling that you don’t want to be with me
I’m tired of feeling that I’m not good enough for you

I’ve had my heart broken once
I don’t want to go thru it again with you
So I’m just going to distance myself
Push myself away till I know
Till I know what you want
Till I know how you feel

When I said I loved you I meant it
Those are words I don’t throw around
But for now “we” are in the past
I’m tired of sitting around waiting for you to finally decide what you want
I’m not going to be there forever waiting for you
I’m not going to waste my life wondering what could’ve been
I got my reality check
Where’s yours?

Copyright Â© fastpitchqt ... [ 2005-07-17 00:16:18]
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Re: Reality Check (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 10:43:26 PM AEST
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wow from me. man i have so been there its not even funny. i know a few people that can relate to this. i also know a few that needs to relate to this. thanks for sharing.

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