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Gone

Contributed by fastpitchqt on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:15:42 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Make up some more stories
Tell me some more lies
How do you expect for me to believe the things you say?
Do you really love me?
Or did you just think you needed to say it
I’m so lost and confused
I don’t know what I want with my life anymore
I don’t want to wait around for you
I don’t want to wait for you to realize what you want
But I also don’t want to lose you

I don’t want to lose that feeling of being with you
But lately I feel like you don’t care
That you don’t care if I’m in your life or not
That you don’t mean the things you say
That you don’t really love me, they’re just words
You don’t talk to me and let me know when things are wrong
You never tell me how you feel
Am I expected to read your mind?
Am I supposed to guess?
I’m at the point now where I don’t care anymore

I don’t care if you want to be with other girls
I don’t care that you say you love me and might not mean it
I don’t care if you miss me
I don’t care if you want to make it work
I don’t care anymore, because you don’t seem to either

So if you don’t care and just want to throw everything away then fine
Don’t try coming back around for another chance

I’m tired of these games
I’m tired of feeling inadequate
I’m tired of not feeling wanted
So until you figure out what it is you want, I’m done
I just hope you don’t realize you want me in your life once it’s too late
Cause by then…ill be gone!

Copyright Â© fastpitchqt ... [ 2005-07-17 00:15:42]
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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Benny14 on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:41:09 AM AEST
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structured and stream of conciousness, i like that combination....though it may seem oxymoronic, it can work wonders...nice job

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