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Coma

Contributed by sprinter27 on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 10:36:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



My heart is beating
And I am breathing
But I am out cold
And I am told
Not to let go
But I do not know,
I am stuck in between life and death
And the choice is up to me and myself
I am in a coma that is deep,
In a deep and long sleep
I try to decide what to do
I want to live when I think of you,
But then I want to not bother
When I think of all the others
Everyone tries to awake me,
Telling me that there is a lot I have to see
But I want to stay in this coma forever,
I never want to wake up: never
People come in and talk,
Then they get up to take a walk
Telling me to think of friends
And move away from the end

So I start to think of my life
And how it is one horrible strife
I know that I want to leave and go,
I have few friends but many foes
So, now I am ready to fall; no doubt
But then you come in and call out,
Like you knew I was ready to let go,
So with you near, now I do not know
If I should let go or not
You talk to me softly, tell me to give it all I have got
To wake up and live another day,
You want it no other way
So here I am, caught up again
Do I want to live? Or is it time to end?
So I am again stuck between life and death
And the choice is up to me and myself

I want to stay in this coma forever,
I never want to wake up: never




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Re: Coma (User Rating: 1 )
by storm on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:09:03 AM AEST
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this poem hit on the head everything i have been feeling today!! excellent job.


Re: Coma (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:10:51 AM AEST
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Great hate...for life.

B


Re: Coma (User Rating: 1 )
by Bones on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 05:23:47 PM AEST
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Very nice poem. Reminds me of the descirbtion of a personal purgatory. But really isn't that what life on Earth is?
Peace,
Bones


Re: Coma (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:18:28 PM AEST
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It's odd... something attracted me to this poem and now that I've read it I've found that, though I've been in a similar coma... I've always been trying to find a way back to life... the other options just weren't strong enough for me.
Honest write.

Love and peace,

Chelsea




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