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Ungrateful
Contributed by
forsaken_soul33
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Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 10:05:55 PM in AEST
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I tried to make you happy,
I did my best to not let you down.
I did everything you asked of me,
Yet, you still wear that frown.
You suffocate me with your criticism,
And fill me with remorse,
I hate the words of your egotism,
And the words of your evil taking its course.
I always stay silent,
I never speak my mind,
That's why I always feel insane and violent,
This happens every time.
You are killing me slowly,
I'm sure you know it well.
My death will be unholy,
And I will probably go to Hell.
You are ungratefull,
Of the things I've done.
I was for slave and tool,
For the things you could've done.
I am angry and I know you won't understand,
That you really made me feel,
As if I was less than a grain of sand.
So now I am here to take a stand.
I won't take it anymore,
You just broke the last strand,
Of sanity, now I bleed due to your hands.
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2005-07-16 22:05:55]
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Re: Ungrateful
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 11:08:59 PM AEST
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aww... very emotional piece. it was well written and full of anger and pain. and i am sorry that you have to put up with the pain and some people are ungrateful and they find it extremely hard to be happy, they rather be depressed and angry. so, please don't feel less than a piece of sand, cause obviously, you are not! and i am glad that you are taking a stand, very good for you! well written piece, keep up the good work! and wishes that it all works out!
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Re: Ungrateful
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:03:21 PM AEST
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Wow...rough ending there...I sure hope youve left this relationship since you posted this write. Good expression in this emotive piece. Take Care.
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